This is the infamous essay I wrote for one of my modules recently. Just in case anyone wants to read it. It's on the book, not the film, so there may be spoilers. It's also probably quite long! Also, I don't think my footnotes will come up, which is basically just where I've got certain quotes from. If anyone wants to know these just ask and I shall reveal. And no, I don't mean *that*. Erm...enjoy...yet another on topic post from the Squirrel of Squirrels.
“They will delve in the earth, and the things that grow and live upon the earth they will not heed. Many a tree shall feel the bite of their iron without pity.”
In the foreword to the second edition of The Lord of the Rings, Tolkien makes his distaste for allegory abundantly clear; “…I cordially dislike allegory in all its manifestations…” . This, of course, makes any allegorical reading difficult, however, with the concession that “An author cannot of course remain wholly unaffected by his experience” (p. xviii), links can be established between author and themes. It is widely noted that Tolkien was anti-industrialism, seeing the destruction it caused to his beloved English countryside – indeed he himself acknowledges that in the foreword; “…The country in which I lived in childhood was being shabbily destroyed…” (p. xix). From this alone, parallels can be drawn between this country and the Shire. Indeed, it seems that amongst the simple binary opposition that forms the basis of the plot, good versus evil, lies commentary, and perhaps warning, about the uncontrollable spread of industry.
It is not that Tolkien seems to oppose industrialism altogether. If one looks at the races of Middle-Earth, it is difficult to establish whether industrialism is seen as good or bad. While the race of Elves seem perfect, there is a distinctly anachronistic feel about them. As a race content with what they have, static and against progress, they have excluded themselves from Middle-Earth and are a dying breed. Amongst the growing industry and change in Middle-Earth, they are uncomfortable and begin to migrate to the West, to their own untouchable haven. Perhaps, though, Tolkien here suggests that industry frightens and chases perfection and beauty from the land.
What one can establish is that Tolkien opposes the expansion of industry for profit or exploitation. As a ‘good’ race, Dwarves are seen as selfish and covetous. Yet, as a race of good nature, the Dwarves cannot be seen to be a damning critique of industrialism, simply of its avarice. Their obsession with exploiting nature for treasure causes major problems for them throughout the history of Middle-Earth; already they have attracted the attention of the dragon Smaug in The Hobbit, who not only steals their treasure but massacres the mountain-dwelling Dwarves. It is telling indeed that in The Fellowship of the Ring, during the passage through the mines of Moria, the atmosphere becomes stagnant, one of decay. Even before the Fellowship enters the mines, the disorder industry causes to nature becomes evident;
‘Ah! Here it is at last!’ said Gandalf. ‘This is where the stream ran: Sirranon, the Gate-stream, they used to call it. But what has happened to the water, I cannot guess; it used to be swift and noisy… (p. 395)
This place of industry is devoid of life, and nature has diminished – even Bill the Pony refuses to enter. As the Fellowship travel through the mines, the more apparent becomes decomposition and lack of life as their footsteps disturb long settled dust. The products of the Dwarves’ industry – in large part their prized “mithril” – have drawn the attention of not dragons, but Orcs, and Sauron, the ‘evil’ of the novel. But even these evil creatures dare not continue to mine for “mithril”. The Dwarves “…delved too greedily and too deep, and disturbed that from which they fled, Durin’s Bane.” (p. 417). Durin’s Bane, it seems, is a Balrog, a spirit of flame , too powerful for mere mortals to defeat. Industry has reaped its financial reward, and in turn, has awoken a great evil. But for the purpose of the tale – and indeed the fortuity of good – the terror awoken by Durin’s people does help in some way. Without the Balrog, Gandalf the Grey would have no catalyst for his transformation into Gandalf the White. Is there then some good that can come of industry’s evils?
Conversely, while the Dwarves exploit the land for profit, Hobbits seemingly have the ideal relationship with nature and industry. W. H. Auden notes that “…except for an invasion by orcs and a bad winter some two hundred and fifty years before, they have suffered no collective misfortune, either from nature or outside enemies” . The implication seems to be that the best relationship with industry and nature is that exemplified by the Shire-folk. Yet, it cannot be ignored that when Saruman attempts to industrialise the Shire (partly for profit, mostly for revenge), their isolation from the expansion of the outside world results in an inability to defend themselves. These home-loving and slow-living beings are overwhelmed by a force that they cannot comprehend, and as a result are not only exploited but also ruined. Hostility and fear of some controlling force have replaced the friendly and co-operative atmosphere that pervades the initial introduction to the Shire. Parallels can indeed be drawn between the system that is in place when the four travellers return to the Shire and factories; by force, appointed masters would enforce the work that would be for an owner’s profit. Here, the Hobbits are given rations and no longer eat frequently and plentifully. As Hob explains to the returnees,
…We grows a lot of food, but we don’t rightly know what becomes of it. It’s all these “gatherers” and “sharers”, I reckon, going round counting and measuring and taking off to storage. They do more gathering than sharing, and we never see most of the stuff again… (p. 336)
The fertility and natural peace of the Shire has been replaced by a scene not unlike those industrial towns that began to spring up all over Tolkien’s beloved English countryside, and Tolkien even goes so far as to implement factory-like buildings which pollute the countryside:
Worse, there was a whole line of the ugly new houses all along Pool Side […] An avenue of trees had stood there. They were all gone. And looking with dismay up the road towards Bag End they saw a tall chimney of brick in the distance. It was pouring out black smoke into the evening air. (p. 342)
Indeed, in the foreword, Tolkien does suggest that the ‘Scouring of the Shire’ was influenced by the industrialisation that was destroying his childhood country “…in days where cars were rare […] and men were still building suburban railways.” (p. xix), and it has been suggested that
Tolkien bitterly resented the effect of industrialism on the countryside, as well as on its traditional way of life. This is nowhere more evident than in his representation of the Shire, the culture of which is deliberately evocative of the England of the late 1800s.
Perhaps the very presence – or rather, the knowledge of the presence – of the Ring brought about the descent of the Shire into industrial turmoil. Prior to this, there was no reason for evil to be drawn to the Shire (unlike the Dwarves whose riches caught the attention of greedy eyes). Races, unaware of its existence, were unaware also of the opportunity for exploitation. But, as mentioned previously, Saruman’s motives for industrialising the Shire were not simply those of avarice, rather those of a personal vendetta. Even industry, though, could not prevent the sturdy Hobbits from rebuilding their home, with the help of some Elvish (and as such, natural) magic. Perhaps there is hope in spite of the devastation industrialism has rendered.
Of course, Saruman, as a powerful being, is enticed by industrialism. It seems that those of an evil nature are those who instigate the evolution of industry. Isengard was once “…green and filled with avenues and groves of fruitful trees, watered by streams that flowed from the mountains to a lake” (p. 191) . But the promise of power and an innate greed resulted in Saruman’s industrialisation of Isengard. Using his cunning, Saruman has manipulated people and things, and even gone so far as to manipulate a super-breed of Orc – “I wonder what [Saruman] has done? Are they Men he has ruined, or has he blended the races of Orcs and Men?” (p. 84). That Isengard and Saruman are capitalist icons is unmistakable. Isengard becomes a caricature of the factories of the British countryside, and its oppressive nature obvious:
Many houses there were, chambers, halls, and passages […] Thousands could dwell there, workers, servants, slaves, and warriors with great store of arms [...] The shafts ran down by many slopes and spiral stairs to caverns far under; there Saruman had treasuries, store-houses, armouries, smithies, and great furnaces. Iron wheels revolved there endlessly, and hammers thudded. At night plumes of vapour steamed from the vents, lit from beneath with red light, or blue, or venomous green… (pp. 191-2)
Perhaps Tolkien is suggesting that industry itself is not a necessarily bad thing, in the right hands, not in those of men like Saruman with “a mind of metal and wheels” (p. 84)
Industry in Middle-Earth devastates its natural beauty and fecundity. Saruman is bound by the desire for power to do whatever is necessary for its gain, as Sauron is bound by the desire to regain his Ring of power. Perhaps the ring itself is a symbol of industrialism perverted, as Sauron took Celebrimbor’s forging of the rings for good purposes (that is, governing races wisely) and twisted it to his own benefit. The effect the ring, industrialism, has on the average being is that it corrupts and destroys them – one need only look at the degeneration of Smeagol to see this. Indeed. Sauron himself can be interpreted as analogous of the empire-building, financially obsessed industrialists of Tolkien’s time. His intentions did not evolve from any evil desire to destroy, but from a desire to gain power and build his empire. Sauron manipulates and nurtures his allies, and his actions become evil and ruinous because his intent, although not necessarily evil, was certainly not good. Yet, Tolkien suggests that there are ‘good’ methods of controlling and ruling, which the industrialists are not exemplifying, through characters such as the Elves, or Aragorn.
But Tolkien further hints at a natural revolution against industrialisation. The grounded Hobbits have already been seen to fight back and restore their natural lifestyle. At Isengard, however, nature is seen to take a far more dynamic role in the insurrection against industrialism as signified here by Saruman. The Ents rise against Saruman’s wanton destruction of their trees and destroy Isengard, flooding it and imprisoning Saruman in his own tower. It is also deeply ironic that those like Saruman most closely associated with industrialism are those who live in towers, while those working with nature, like Hobbits, live in and on the earth.
Industrialism is evident throughout The Lord of the Rings, and whether or not this was Tolkien’s intention is unclear. It does seem that Tolkien is counselling against the wanton destruction and pollution of the natural environment for the sake of profit and advancement. What is certain, however, is that Tolkien’s stance is not clear-cut. The representations of industries are not altogether on the evil side of the binary that encompasses the novel. While Tolkien did not entirely appreciate the Elves’ lack of progress, he certainly did not advocate the hyper-progress initiated by Saruman. Perhaps one can read The Lord of the Rings as expressive of Tolkien’s disgust over the intentions of those behind industrialisation and the careless destruction it caused to nature.
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Aule
(Wed May 14 14:06:05)
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Hey, I've read this before! I've still got a copy of it on my computer. How did you do? What mark did you get?
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Yes, you have! I did OK, I got a 2:1, and although the mark is nothing to be sneered at, I'm a bit disappointed because I get the same marks when I put no effort in! Makes it all seem a bit pointless really! But having said that, my tutor hadn't even read LOTR and likes Harry Potter. Says it all I think! Thanks again for reading through it Aule!
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Aule
(Wed May 14 14:17:05)
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What's 2:1 mean? I'm not familiar with that sort of grading system.
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Sorry! It's the 2nd highest mark you can get in terms of degree classification. I got a 64 for the essay itself, but in terms of what degree class I'll end up with, that counts as a 2:1 (anything between 60 and 70 is a 2:1, 70+ is a First) - sort of like that. Does that make sense or am I a bit pants at explaining this?!
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2nd highest mark?!!!!!! Thats very good squirelly!!!!!!
Well done!![clap][clap]
Cold water ain't hot!
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(Wed May 14 14:18:15)
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UPDATED Wed May 14 14:19:22 |
You should boycott all your classes untill your tutor changes to a LOTR fan instead!!!!!!
Cold water ain't hot!
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Well he likes the films, but he said he just never bothered to read all the books. Which is really quite annoying. I don't see how a tutor can mark an essay having not read the book! But never mind, it's all good. I give him hell for being a Potterlover anyway...
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Bravo! Bravo!
Honk if you love peace and quiet
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She's very clever considering she's a squirell isnt she Fernie???
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Yes, Squirrel knows her stuff!![[yes]](http://i.imdb.com/Photos/CMSIcons/emoticons/basic/yes.gif)
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Hey Squiz! (its short for Squirrel, I couldb bother to type out Squirrel so I put Squiz instead...oh the irony!!!)
I really enjoyed reading that. I would have given it more than 64. Are you expecting a 2.1? I got a 2.1 Im dead proud of myself because it was difficult year for me. I think I would have got a 2.1 even if it hadnt had been a struggle - Ive got the ideas Im just crap at expressing them
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Thanks Luce (not Loose, that would be rude), I hoped I'd be able to get a First at one point, but as my Uni have f*cked me over royally ('scuse the language) the best I can hope for is a 2:1 and I need to get 2:1's straight across the board this year to do that. I've been too slack, if I really applied myself I could have done it I'm sure! 2:1 ain't nothing to be laughed at though! Yay you! Well done!
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Yay me indeed! And yay you!
You'll get your 2.1 dont worry
And dont regret for a second not working your nuts off (excuse the pun!!), uni is meant to be fun too. I let my marks down in my second year and worked by bottom off in my final year and came out with a 2.1, so you can too. You havent got long now so just keep going! Heck, I didnt start revising for my final exams until 2 weeks before they started, becuase of my dissertations!!
You will be fine.
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An excellent essay, Squirrel! Well-thought out and written. I would have given you the highest mark.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Thanks Athene
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This is so good, it deserves a resounding BUMP!
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sinaes
(Wed May 14 18:54:25)
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Great essay squirrel. I'm impressed
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Thanks I'm sure I could put up random essays about random books and that, but as it's a TTT board I don't think it's appropriate! I was sneaky on this one, convinced the tutor LOTR was contemporary lit
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(Wed May 14 19:03:10)
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UPDATED Wed May 14 19:04:00 |
My queen, your genius is not reflected in your grade.
If you feel that the faculty at your university needs a little friendly persuasion to help understand your superior intellect...
*ignites lightsaber*
last and most faithful, Imrahil, servant of Her Awe-Inspiring Radiance, Squirrel...
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though i agree with your sentiments on this masterful piece of work, where do you get off calling her my queen??????? The squirrel belongs to no sith lord.
Saruman
Rohan is MINE
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You misunderstand me Greg. I imply no possession of her. The implication is that I am beholden to her. It is a statement of relationship, not possession.
*waves lightsaber at Greg*
I feel generous today. I'll let you leave here intact. Squirrel is happy so I am happy.
If irony were strawberries, we'd all be drinking a lot of smoothies right now.
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Squirrel is mildly displeased. No fighting in the ranks boys.
If there is to be any chopping of bodily parts it will only be at my command. You are both required to be intact for the purposes of my plans thus far. You have things I will be needing, such as lightsabers. *ahem*
Yes, lightsabers.
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The very fact that he calls me his queen suggests that in the relationship I am the dominant power and he is the submissive. You are therefore quite right to say that I belong to no sith lord. Nor does the Squirrel belong to any man. She goes where she wishes, and will let no man impede he quest for supremacy.
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I believe your Sith skills would be most persuasive. It's the Canadian tutor. You know what to do my servant.
I thought you may have abandoned me Sithypoopykins, I am much relieved to see that you have not.
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Squirrel, great essay! I really enjoyed it. You brought up ideas I'd never thought of. Well done!
Curiouser and curiouser!
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Thanks, glad it was enjoyable to read!
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Wow girl, I'm impressed! I like your train of thought and your style is very polished. Thanks for putting up your excellent essay!
Begone foul dwimmerlaik, lord of carrion!
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Thanks Wajz, glad you liked it. You mean you've not seen me be serious it is possible you know....I'm not just a lunatic honest!
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Great essay O mammal.
You know what's freaky? You employ some of my essay techniques
It's like I'm reading some of my own work.
How beautiful it is to do nothing and then rest afterwards.
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Only your Mum could be prouder!![[smile]](http://i.imdb.com/Photos/CMSIcons/emoticons/basic/smile.gif) (we need a happy crying icon)
Squirrely that was excellent! I agree with others that have stated you deserved higher marks on your work.
bovilexia: The uncontrollable urge to lean out the window & yell "Moo!" every time you pass a cow.
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But...you are my Mummy! Aren't you....
Thanks El, it's much appreciated!
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(Thu May 15 12:15:18)
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I got a chance to sit down and really read this.
You have some very excellent observations, certainly ones I had not thought of before.
The equating of the firey balrog to industry's own rewards is very imaginative, astatue and just a little scary. I also liked the obsrvation about "gatehring and sharing" in Saruman's Shire. The thought that immediately sprung to my mind was that of Communist Russia, where everyone was supposedly working towards the greater good, but very little "good" seemed to make it's way down to the workers. The observation abuot those that favored industrialism living in Tower, far removed from the Earth was spot on as well. I wonder where Gondor falls in all this?
Very well done!
Horaaay for Squirrel!
Faith manages.
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Thanks Kip!
I can't actually remember what I wrote and I don't want to re-read it again there's only so much I can take! I don't even remember where the Balrog thing sprang from. Moment of inspiration obviously!!
As for Gondor...well, that's why I avoided it! I think...and I'm just going off the cuff here...that Gondor as a city of Men suggests a teetering balance between the two oppositions: industry vs. nature. Men aren't entirely good, nor are they entirely bad, but they don't seem to have come down on either side of industrial advances. Perhaps it's just Tolkien's way of saying that Man needs to be careful where he goes on this subject, because he can go too far either way...?
Perhaps?
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I loved your essay! I would definitely have given it the highest mark! And, just so that you know, that's saying something, since I had the most significant training in how to write from someone who I have (in great respect, actually) nicknamed "The Ruthless Editor!"
Willow
If mankind must have an enemy
Let it be his warlike pride.
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Thanks! Hey, maybe I should give you all my tutor's email address and you can bombard him with abuse telling him I should have gotten a higher mark...
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Hi never-poke-a-squirrel, very impressive discourse! A fine job, well worth the read.
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A very good esssy. It may have been worth mentioning that Tolkien was partly inspired by the early Romantics, who where also very against industrialistaion. I say this becuase one of my friends did their dissertation on Tolkien and his infulences and he spoke a lot about Blake and Wordsworth and got a first.
Quite a fantastic nickname also. I feel mine is unworthy now!!
The only truth is life.
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Thanks I probably would have done so had I payed more attention in my Romantic module...
Plus, it was a bit of a bugger having only a 1500 word limit, which meant that I couldn't do everything that was probably possible to have done!
I wouldn't say my nickname was fantastic, just a bit...er...odd... But thanks, and yours is nothing to feel unworthy about, I rather like it. I just keep seeing some really kitsch demon tapping away at a keyboard now....
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Oooooooh praise from Paul Hawthorne is praise indeed! Thanks for taking the time to read it!
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